The best poem I wrote

[LMD-LLE 10]

Like a butterfly you flew around

And I ran behind you like a child

But no matter how hard I tried

You faded away into my failure’s cloud

 

You let me fall only cause I drowned

When I though you’d lend me your hand

Oh my God! Was I stupid or blind

If I though you’d stay by my side

 

Sometimes, life drives me mad

With all this confusion in my mind

Should I be disappointed or ashamed

For all the good intentions I had !

 

I know may be I was undecided

Choked by the first story I lived

My heart and my soul were injured

And for that my felings were troubled

 

May be I was cruel and unkind

And you were the victim I found

But God knows what I felt inside

And what kind of relationships I searched

 

I wished you’d be my second world

My source of joy in my love’s land

I wished you’d be more than a friend

I hoped you’d finally understand

 

I really can’t see why you became hard

Why you knifed my heart with a sword

Why can’t you leave the past behind

Why don’t change all with a simple word

 

It seems you only care for your pride

But never if I will be glad or sad

So your rancors are not easy to hide

And for that you still can’t look ahead

 

I think love could never be so bad

‘Cause it’s not a simple thing you can pretend

So your feeling was just a masquerade

And my love to you died and crumbled in the end

[LMD-LLE 10]

Salut tout le monde! Je sais que c'est pas un forum d'anglais, mais je demande à toute personne qui comprend Anglais de me laisser des commentaires. Merci

[admin 2]

Je comprends l'anglais, mais je ne comprends pas les poèmes ... raté ! :04:

[LMD-LLE 10]

Je comprends l'anglais, mais je ne comprends pas les poèmes ... raté ! :04:

 

Chacun sa nature, merci d'avoir laissé un mot :-)