Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 :p Yeaah i did understand what you said, but as i am rebellious, i want to comment.:D We say, as a rebel ;) Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 Ok let's do some Elvis.. Try to make this song sound funny The wonder of you When no-one else can understand me When everything I do is wrong You give me love and consolation You give me hope to carry on And you're always there to lend a hand In everything I do That's the wonder The wonder of you And when you smile the world is brighter You touch my hand and I'm a king Your face to me is worth a fortune Your love for me is everything I guess I'll never know the reason why You love me as you do That's the wonder The wonder of you When all of them think they can reach me They are all trying t analyze and judge me you turn your back to me and leave me alone Dispair possess my heart my soul become hollow And you disappear from my life, As we have never shared a couch. It's some how killing me To have live in this hypocrisy Your smiles never shine again And it makes me whine Your presence to me is a pain And this affection of yours is vain Why didn't she leave me? Guess? The answer is the fear of loneliness It's always killing me To continue living in this hypocrisy. Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 When all of them think they can reach me They are all trying t analyze and judge me you turn your back to me and leave me alone Dispair possess my heart my soul become hollow And you disappear from my life, As we have never shared a couch. It's some how killing me To have live in this hypocrisy Your smiles never shine again And it makes me whine Your presence to me is a pain And this affection of yours is vain Why didn't she leave me? Guess? The answer is the fear of loneliness It's always killing me To continue living in this hypocrisy. Woow !! Deep stuff :chut: You surely ain't shalow Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 We say, as a rebel ;) Can't we say rebellious ?:rolleyes: I am thirsty (adj) I am rebellious ( adj) A rebel is a noun. Please give me an explanation?:D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 Can't we say rebellious ?:rolleyes: I am thirsty (adj) I am rebellious ( adj) A rebel is a noun. Please give me an explanation?:D Yes you can I just wanted to be rebellious :D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 Woow !! Deep stuff :chut: You surely ain't shalow :p I did try to solve it yesterday but as i didn't do it fully.:rolleyes: I have decided to do it today.:D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 Yes you can I just wanted to be rebellious :D It's better if you are a rebel, it suit me perfectly .:D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest RIHEM Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 hi everybody:04: how R U ? Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 :p I did try to solve it yesterday but as i didn't do it fully.:rolleyes: I have decided to do it today.:D You've done some good work here...but did you forget my last advice ? .... On émotion per sentence makes it even simpler ;) Do you wanna work it now and redo the first chapter ? Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 hi everybody:04: how R U ? Rickiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiie .:youyou Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest RIHEM Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 Rickiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiie .:youyou :mdr::mdr::mdr: a youyou!!! why?:confused: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 hi everybody:04: how R U ? Hi , we are not everybody , just two bodies démon and angélique. We are fine:o thanks and you ??:D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 :mdr::mdr::mdr: a youyou!!! why?:confused: It's good to see you :o (even though you don't behave in class) Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest RIHEM Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 Hi , we are not everybody , just two bodies démon and angélique. We are fine:o thanks and you ??:D fine thanks ;) Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 You've done some good work here...but did you forget my last advice ? .... On émotion per sentence makes it even simpler ;) Do you wanna work it now and redo the first chapter ? :rolleyes:And you did forget something. That i am démon and angélique, so it obvisous that i will have condradictory émotions in the same sentence.:p Yep , i will try but i can't promise to succed.:rolleyes: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest RIHEM Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 It's good to see you :o (even though you don't behave in class) oh thanks capo, I'm quiet and i keep silent:04: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 :rolleyes:And you did forget something. That i am démon and angélique, so it obvisous that i will have condradictory émotions in the same sentence.:p Yep , i will try but i can't promise to succed.:rolleyes: I'll redo your first chapter for you :cool: May be Rickie will do the second and you the third ?? We gonna change your song :badmood: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 oh thanks capo, I'm quiet and i keep silent:04: Don't go silent on me today again :D I need you Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest RIHEM Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 Don't go silent on me today again I need you really:confused:, what have you done as work?, I was absent and I'm lazy to read , :mdr: just sum up plz:). what's the lesson? Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 When all of them think they can reach me They are all trying t analyze and judge me you turn your back to me and leave me alone Dispair possess my heart my soul become hollow ;) When all think they could reach me, scrute and judge, square analyse me. You turn your back and you leave me, Despaired and hollow, heart possessed. Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 really:confused:, what have you done as work?, I was absent and I'm lazy to read , :mdr: just sum up plz:). what's the lesson? How about you giving the lesson today ? :04: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest RIHEM Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 How about you giving the lesson today ? :04: ah no !! not me plz:04: you r the teacher :huh: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 The wonder of you When no-one else can understand me When everything I do is wrong You give me love and consolation You give me hope to carry on When all of them try to chain me When all my gestures are watched precisely It make me feel insecurity Pain become my monotony. ;)Capo I am waiting for your advices and criticism.:D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 ah no !! not me plz:04: you r the teacher :huh: I'm just an old coach :wheelchair: But hey, I'm running out of ideas here... What shall we do ? Plain practice or play with a song of your choice ? Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 5, 2011 Partager Posted December 5, 2011 ;) When all think they could reach me, scrute and judge, square analyse me. You turn your back and you leave me, Despaired and hollow, heart possessed. :rolleyes:Ah i have finally understand the principle. First i thought that I have to keep the same structure. Now i know that i can change it .;) Citer Link to post Share on other sites
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