moa1974 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Start to tell us about the story related to your avatar "the title" :confused: It s a goat. A female goat ans she s nice. And a wolf, very big and very naughty :o Ok, I try to do better. It s a french tale. The story is about a goat belonged to a farmer, Mr Seguin. Mr Seguin had a lot of goats but all were eaten by a wolf. He loves his new goat because she s very beautiful. But the goat would like to be free and to go to the mountain. One day, she can escape from the farm. And she goes to the mountain. She s very happy and plays all the day. But on the evening, she hears the wolf and she is upset. The wolf comes and she decides to try to fight with him until the opposite of the sunrise ( :o) because she s very and proud. So, she fights all the night and she s very courageous. When the sun stand up, she closes her eyes and the wolf eats her. And it s why I wrote it s a story to frighten children with freedrom. Thank you to listen me Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest plankiki Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 :confused: It s a goat. A female goat ans she s nice. And a wolf, very big and very naughty :o Ok, I try to do better. It s a french tale. The story is about a goat belonged to a farmer, Mr Seguin. Mr Seguin had a lot of goats but all were eaten by a wolf. He loves his new goat because she s very beautiful. But the goat would like to be free and to go to the mountain. One day, she can escape from the farm. And she goes to the mountain. She s very happy and plays all the day. But on the evening, she hears the wolf and she is upset. The wolf comes and she decides to try to fight with him until the opposite of the sunrise ( :o) because she s very and proud. So, she fights all the night and she s very courageous. When the sun stand up, she closes her eyes and the wolf eats her. And it s why I wrote it s a story to frighten children with freedrom. Thank you to listen me :lol: .......... Citer Link to post Share on other sites
moa1974 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 :lol: .......... :mad: you are laughting about me? you are naughty like the wolf :mad: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest plankiki Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 :mad: you are laughting about me? you are naughty like the wolf :mad: No. I'm just mean. :D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
pulse 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 :confused: It s a goat. A female goat ans she s nice. And a wolf, very big and very naughty :o Ok, I try to do better. It s a french tale. The story is about a goat belonged to a farmer, Mr Seguin. Mr Seguin had a lot of goats but all were eaten by a wolf. He loves his new goat because she s very beautiful. But the goat would like to be free and to go to the mountain. One day, she can escape from the farm. And she goes to the mountain. She s very happy and plays all the day. But on the evening, she hears the wolf and she is upset. The wolf comes and she decides to try to fight with him until the opposite of the sunrise ( :o) because she s very and proud. So, she fights all the night and she s very courageous. When the sun stand up, she closes her eyes and the wolf eats her. And it s why I wrote it s a story to frighten children with freedrom. Thank you to listen me May I correct some mistakes? hmm it seems very interesting ,but don't tell me that it is a book of 100 pages and you resumed it in fews lines :D Thanks for sharing this tale with us Citer Link to post Share on other sites
moa1974 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 May I correct some mistakes? hmm it seems very interesting ,but don't tell me that it is a book of 100 pages and you resumed it in fews lines :D Thanks for sharing this tale with us yes, please, if it doesn t bore you :o No, it s a novel, about 20 pages Citer Link to post Share on other sites
moa1974 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 I m going to do a rest. I come back later. Thks pulse:p Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Nimos Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Me copying :mad: never :mad: It is forbidden to use another language than Englsh here :mad: What a suspicious crazy woman you can be....Hopefully soon you have a impulse :D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Nimos Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 :mad: you are laughting about me? you are naughty like the wolf :mad: Why should the wolf be the responsible of the sleeping and lazy goat?:mad: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
pulse 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 :confused: It s a goat. A female goat ans she s nice. And a wolf, very big and very naughty the tale deals with a nice goat and a naughty wolf :o do you know that naughty means coquine in Frensh :D? Ok, I will try to do better. It's a french tale. The story is about a goat which belong to a farmer, Mr Seguin. Mr Seguin had a lot of goats but all were eaten by a wolf.He loves his new goat because she s very beautiful. But the goat prefered freedom and to live in the mountains. One day, she escaped. She was very happy and played all the day in the mountains.But on the evening, she heard the wolf.It makes her upset. She decided to fight till the sunrise ( :o) because she was proud. So, she was courageous and fought all the night. When the sunrise,, she closes her eyes and the wolf ate her. I wrote it to frighten children .To make them conscious that even freedom has a price. Thank you for listning to me Use the past when you tell a story. emm so you wrote the tale? that's great . Congratulation. Citer Link to post Share on other sites
pulse 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 What a suspicious crazy woman you can be....Hopefully soon you have a impulse :D Yeap,am a an impulsive personne ,it causes me a lot of problems Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest plankiki Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Use the past when you tell a story. emm so you wrote the tale? that's great . Congratulation. Tu en es sure ? Citer Link to post Share on other sites
pulse 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 I m going to take a rest. I will be back later. Thks pulse:p Talk to you later. you are welcome Citer Link to post Share on other sites
pulse 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Tu en es sure ? I read this in English and American literature Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Nimos Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Tu en es sure ? She is right, for telling tales... we always use past tense, exactly as for French:p Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest plankiki Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 I read this in English and American literature Ok. ............ Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest plankiki Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 She is right, for telling tales... we always use past tense, exactly as for French:p JE ne dis pas qu'elle a tort, je voulais juste etre sure aussi. Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Nimos Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Yeap,am a an impulsive personne ,it causes me a lot of problems There are two things people will ask you to do: - Stop being spontaneous... - Stop being impulsive Because both of them make you authentic... It does matter if it drives you in troubles to be such woman, the most important is to choose to keep being that woman. Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Nimos Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 JE ne dis pas qu'elle a tort, je voulais juste etre sure aussi. Clarified :p Citer Link to post Share on other sites
seussa BBA 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Come On guys !!!!! English ?? you just be kidding me !! it's sooooooooooooooooo easy! and i Love so much !! soooo u have to improve your English coz it's language of the world not french !! sooo thnx gauys i wish u nice day !! sa7a ramdankom Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest plankiki Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Come On guys !!!!! English ?? you just be kidding me !! it's sooooooooooooooooo easy! and i Love so much !! soooo u have to improve your English coz it's language of the world not french !! sooo thnx gauys i wish u nice day !! sa7a ramdankom Des fois je trouve cette phrase vexante. :clown: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
seussa BBA 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Des fois je trouve cette phrase vexante. :clown: pour koi Mr : plankiki ??? tu trouve la phrase Vexante !!!!!!:mad::02: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
pulse 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 There are two things people will ask you to do: - Stop being spontaneous... - Stop being impulsive Because both of them make you authentic... It does matter if it drives you in troubles to be such woman, the most important is to choose to keep being that woman. Am both of them except in some cases. there are some personnes who don't make me feel at ease so I cant't be spontaneous. Thanks for the advice. Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Nimos Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Am both of them except in some cases. there are some personnes who don't make me feel at ease so I cant't be spontaneous. Thanks for the advice. It should not be about people but about you. Citer Link to post Share on other sites
moa1974 10 Posted July 23, 2012 Partager Posted July 23, 2012 Why should the wolf be the responsible of the sleeping and lazy goat?:mad: :mdr::mdr: you are a killer like the wolf, too :mad: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
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