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try changing the verbs to the opposite as well as the nouns (and keep the rythm)

 

:)

none's hearing me

i speak the sentence they are hearing

only the silence of my words

someone starting staring

i can hide their bodies

only the shapes of their nose

 

i'm going back where the moon stops brighting

thru' the weaking sun

going back where the clouds oposites my body

facing off the south west

swiming on winter tornado

and diving into the sands like a feather

 

i'm going back where the moon stops brighting

thru' the weaking sun

going back where the clouds oposites my body

facing off the south west

swiming on winter tornado

and diving into the sands like a feather

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none's hearing me

i speak the sentence they are hearing

only the silence of my words

someone starting staring

i can hide their bodies

only the shapes of their nose

 

i'm going back where the moon stops brighting

thru' the weaking sun

going back where the clouds oposites my body

facing off the south west

swiming on winter tornado

and diving into the sands like a feather

 

i'm going back where the moon stops brighting

thru' the weaking sun

going back where the clouds oposites my body

facing off the south west

swiming on winter tornado

and diving into the sands like a feather

 

Excellent man, you're goooooooooood :thumbup:

Not only did you make a happy song sound sad,

but you made it funny too.

Not easy to do :)

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One hour and I'm still waitiiiing,

for three easy lines from Rickie.

I'm going so patiently crazyyy,

wish i took a shower and a nap....

 

hummm, hmmm, hmm, humm, humm,

Now an angeldemonic is coming,

thank God somebody's listenening...

Or is it the damn echoes of my mind ?

:)

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People stopping staring,========= People not even noticing me

I can't see their faces,========== Their face are haunting me

Only the shadows of their eyes.=========== Their eyes are scaring me

 

Sorry i know it is inccorect.:D

 

Everything is fine,

you just repeat some words, that's all :)

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Some rules when you practice english:

Relax, stay natural and don't think too much.

Just let it come out as it is. Don't try to be perfect.

It's only a second or third language...

 

See you later...

I leave you with the original song :)

[YOUTUBE]8fwY3jGNsog[/YOUTUBE]

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One hour and I'm still waitiiiing,

for three easy lines from Rickie.

I'm going so patiently crazyyy,

wish i took a shower and a nap....

 

hummm, hmmm, hmm, humm, humm,

Now an angeldemonic is coming,

thank God somebody's listenening...

Or is it the damn echoes of my mind ?

:)

 

hi I'm dreadfuly sorry capo:confused: , i've a bad connexion,

i was like a crazy!! :mad:

oh i see you have done the work without me :(

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Here goes ,

Let's change the meaning of this song :

 

Everybody's talking at me.

I don't hear a word they're saying,

Only the echoes of my mind.

People stopping staring,

I can't see their faces,

Only the shadows of their eyes.

 

I'm going where the sun keeps shining

Thru' the pouring rain,

Going where the weather suits my clothes,

Backing off of the North East wind,

Sailing on summer breeze

And skipping over the ocean like a stone.

 

 

Everybody’s ignoring me

I just want to hear a word from them,

The echoes of my mind are silent too,

People are staring

I can see their faces,

And the shadows of their eyes.

 

I’m going where the hell keeps burning,

Thru’ the grey ashes,

Going where the weather burn my clothes,

Backing off of the sirocco wind,

Burning on summer sun,

And skipping over on the hole like a stone.

 

:)

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Here goes ,

Let's change the meaning of this song :

 

Everybody's talking at me.

I don't hear a word they're saying,

Only the echoes of my mind.

People stopping staring,

I can't see their faces,

Only the shadows of their eyes.

 

I'm going where the sun keeps shining

Thru' the pouring rain,

Going where the weather suits my clothes,

Backing off of the North East wind,

Sailing on summer breeze

And skipping over the ocean like a stone.

 

None is tchating with me

But they kept hurting me

My ears are ringing

Every one is watching

They are all wearing masks

But i keep seeing their scaring gaze

 

I will embrace this darkness

That will put an end to my distress

Sink in this dark water

Which will hide my nakedness

 

 

I's all i can do sorry.:D

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