EdoElric 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 Wowwwwwwwwww :eek: This is impressive !! So good ! You've done so fast and kept the rythm :thumbup: thanks. :04: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 You're welcome Eddie As you see, we're still on the first three Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 C'mon Rickie :fish2: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 thanks. :04: try changing the verbs to the opposite as well as the nouns (and keep the rythm) Citer Link to post Share on other sites
EdoElric 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 try changing the verbs to the opposite as well as the nouns (and keep the rythm) none's hearing me i speak the sentence they are hearing only the silence of my words someone starting staring i can hide their bodies only the shapes of their nose i'm going back where the moon stops brighting thru' the weaking sun going back where the clouds oposites my body facing off the south west swiming on winter tornado and diving into the sands like a feather i'm going back where the moon stops brighting thru' the weaking sun going back where the clouds oposites my body facing off the south west swiming on winter tornado and diving into the sands like a feather Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 none's hearing me i speak the sentence they are hearing only the silence of my words someone starting staring i can hide their bodies only the shapes of their nose i'm going back where the moon stops brighting thru' the weaking sun going back where the clouds oposites my body facing off the south west swiming on winter tornado and diving into the sands like a feather i'm going back where the moon stops brighting thru' the weaking sun going back where the clouds oposites my body facing off the south west swiming on winter tornado and diving into the sands like a feather Excellent man, you're goooooooooood :thumbup: Not only did you make a happy song sound sad, but you made it funny too. Not easy to do Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 tanks a lot :oyou're welcome.:D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
EdoElric 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 Excellent man, you're goooooooooood :thumbup: Not only did you make a happy song sound sad, but you made it funny too. Not easy to do thank you, have a good day my friend, see you soonalgaz. :04: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 thank you, have a good day my friend, see you soonalgaz. :04: God speed ;) Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 People stopping staring,========= People not even noticing me I can't see their faces,========== Their face are haunting me Only the shadows of their eyes.=========== Their eyes are scaring me Sorry i know it is inccorect.:D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest from nulle part Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 helle every body,hello teacher excuse me to day I have a lot of work Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 One hour and I'm still waitiiiing, for three easy lines from Rickie. I'm going so patiently crazyyy, wish i took a shower and a nap.... hummm, hmmm, hmm, humm, humm, Now an angeldemonic is coming, thank God somebody's listenening... Or is it the damn echoes of my mind ? Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 People stopping staring,========= People not even noticing me I can't see their faces,========== Their face are haunting me Only the shadows of their eyes.=========== Their eyes are scaring me Sorry i know it is inccorect.:D Everything is fine, you just repeat some words, that's all Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 helle every body,hello teacher excuse me to day I have a lot of work Hello neily, You're late but you came just on time :stuart: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 Some rules when you practice english: Relax, stay natural and don't think too much. Just let it come out as it is. Don't try to be perfect. It's only a second or third language... See you later... I leave you with the original song [YOUTUBE]8fwY3jGNsog[/YOUTUBE] Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest RIHEM Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 One hour and I'm still waitiiiing, for three easy lines from Rickie. I'm going so patiently crazyyy, wish i took a shower and a nap.... hummm, hmmm, hmm, humm, humm, Now an angeldemonic is coming, thank God somebody's listenening... Or is it the damn echoes of my mind ? hi I'm dreadfuly sorry capo:confused: , i've a bad connexion, i was like a crazy!! :mad: oh i see you have done the work without me Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 I did'nt do a thing :D It all came naturally by itself :04: I'm just a coach...not an artist Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest RIHEM Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 ok :D i see you should leave , what a pity!! i haven't learn a thing today:04: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 Gotta earn some bread It's not too late, just turn the happy song into a sad one (using some of your words). I'll check on you later... So long late Rickie Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest RIHEM Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 I'll try bye ;) Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Guest RIHEM Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 Here goes , Let's change the meaning of this song : Everybody's talking at me. I don't hear a word they're saying, Only the echoes of my mind. People stopping staring, I can't see their faces, Only the shadows of their eyes. I'm going where the sun keeps shining Thru' the pouring rain, Going where the weather suits my clothes, Backing off of the North East wind, Sailing on summer breeze And skipping over the ocean like a stone. Everybody’s ignoring me I just want to hear a word from them, The echoes of my mind are silent too, People are staring I can see their faces, And the shadows of their eyes. I’m going where the hell keeps burning, Thru’ the grey ashes, Going where the weather burn my clothes, Backing off of the sirocco wind, Burning on summer sun, And skipping over on the hole like a stone. Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 Good job Rickie :clap_1: But please don't let nothing burn you I'll try later to do a sad version of my own :o Wish me luck... Citer Link to post Share on other sites
pulse 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 Good job Rickie :clap_1: But please don't let nothing burn you I'll try later to do a sad version of my own :o Wish me luck... :20: Hello caporal,how are you ? No one to talk English with? :rolleyes: Citer Link to post Share on other sites
DemonAngelic 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 Here goes , Let's change the meaning of this song : Everybody's talking at me. I don't hear a word they're saying, Only the echoes of my mind. People stopping staring, I can't see their faces, Only the shadows of their eyes. I'm going where the sun keeps shining Thru' the pouring rain, Going where the weather suits my clothes, Backing off of the North East wind, Sailing on summer breeze And skipping over the ocean like a stone. None is tchating with me But they kept hurting me My ears are ringing Every one is watching They are all wearing masks But i keep seeing their scaring gaze I will embrace this darkness That will put an end to my distress Sink in this dark water Which will hide my nakedness I's all i can do sorry.:D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
Caporal 10 Posted December 4, 2011 Partager Posted December 4, 2011 :20: Hello caporal,how are you ? No one to talk English with? :rolleyes: Hi pulsie Good to see you ! Let's talk...It's good to talk :D Citer Link to post Share on other sites
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